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Sun in the Snow: X-mas Gift
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As the snow slowly falls down it chills my skin,
Freezes against tears I've shed,
Cools the wound still covered with dry blood.
I look up the the strom gray clouds,
Expecting to see gloomy darkness,
Now that she was gone from my life.
But I am surprised to see,
Sunlight peeking out through the clouds,
As their snowflakes still fall to the ground.
The beam of light barely shows,
Makes the snow below it shimmer,
Like I'm standing in a field of diamonds
Strangely it reminds me of my heart,
The feeble hope that she will return to me,
Shining past the negative thoughts of my family and friends.
I grin and my teeth chatter slightly,
Because now I know,
My hope is never in vain
Freezes against tears I've shed,
Cools the wound still covered with dry blood.
I look up the the strom gray clouds,
Expecting to see gloomy darkness,
Now that she was gone from my life.
But I am surprised to see,
Sunlight peeking out through the clouds,
As their snowflakes still fall to the ground.
The beam of light barely shows,
Makes the snow below it shimmer,
Like I'm standing in a field of diamonds
Strangely it reminds me of my heart,
The feeble hope that she will return to me,
Shining past the negative thoughts of my family and friends.
I grin and my teeth chatter slightly,
Because now I know,
My hope is never in vain
First of all, this is a gift to my DA brother *Pikacshu. He has just put up his wishlist and I thought that I might as well make something for him. I mean, he's already done two pictures for me, why not give something to him?
Second, this is an attempt to write in the present text so it might be a bit iffy.
Third and finally, I only added snow so it would relate to Christmas more.
Still, I hope you like it. Merry Early Christmas!
Second, this is an attempt to write in the present text so it might be a bit iffy.
Third and finally, I only added snow so it would relate to Christmas more.
Still, I hope you like it. Merry Early Christmas!
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awww beautifull <3
the only thing is that we never have snow xD
but is Xmass related so OwO
the only thing is that we never have snow xD
but is Xmass related so OwO